the Final Tidbit of The Old Man and the Butterfly - rough

Here's the final I'm turning in tomorrow. It's still a little rough. Had a problem with the XTI moving with each frame, maybe the click of the camera, not sure. I had to use AfterEffects and with some help with motion tracking I got it to this. The music is me, simple and stupid along with the voice. I'll rerecord the vocals and music and clean it up some but I think that I may pursue this to completion for a portfolio piece. Let me know what you think.